Amazing Writing

We have been working on our writing goals this term.  This week was are writing imaginary recounts about dragons.  Here is Max's story...

Max  9.4

I  looked out  of  my  window.  I  saw  a  drain, a  scary  one!    It  breathed  fire  at  me. It  went  closer  and  closer  to  me.  I  told  Mum (that)  i  saw  a dragon.  I  went  back  up  stairs.  it  breathed  fire  at  me  again. I jumped  and  made a  noise.  The  dragon  heard  me.  It was  flying  to  me.  It  was  green  and  black  with  sharp  teeth.  It  burnt  the  trees  on  fire!