Wednesday 4 March 2015

Colour Poems

This week we have been trying to use descriptive language in our writing.  On Tuesday we did blue (since that is our house colour and our sound of the week is eeeeeeeew).  Today we did the other colours of the rainbow...

Green is like a juicy kiwi fruit that is yummy and very healthy and gives you energy.
By Jamin

Green is like the weirdest stuff.  Green is like a big crocodile that snaps you up with it’s strong teeth.
By Kupa


Green is like a tuatara crawling and walking in the humongous forest.
By Jayden


Green is like a big fat frog that jumps into the pond water making a ginormous splash.
By Osiris

Red is like the slithery and poisonous snake that eats you with his sharp poisonous teeth if you stand next to him.
By Micah

Red is like a rotten tomato, if you eat it, it will splat in your mouth.
By Harper

Red is like a yummy strawberry that you put in the microwave to make strawberry milk.
By Shawnee

Red is like the burning lava that burns you whenever you touch it.  Red is like a juicy cherry that has a big, hard pip in the middle.
By Raumati

Orange is like an orange that is healthy and great and tangy.

By Joshua

Orange is like a juicy orange that squirts in your mouth.  Orange is like a beautiful butterfly that flies over the car.
By Daisy

Orange is like a spicy tomato that spreads all over your mouth when you squish it with your teeth.

By Ronin

Yellow is like a tall, spotty giraffe that eats the grass.

By Lily

Yellow is like a the juicy lemon that you pick off a tree.  Yellow is like the sourest lemon that burns your mouth.
By Quinn

Yellow is like a tall giraffe that eats leaves high up in the tree.
By Sopheap

White is like a snow leopard that is faster than a tiger.  White is like freezing cold milk that comes from a cow.  White is like vanilla ice cream that is as cold as ice!
By Wairakau

Pink is like a really bright and skinny piggy that can run really fast.
By Catherine

Brown is like a yummy chocolate that is not healthy, it is sugary.  It would be yummy to have every day.
By Sophie

Black is like a dark chair that can break and flip you in the air.

By Jesse

Black is like the blackest, bumpiest road that you drive and zoom on.
By Max

Black is like the night time sky that has glowing stars in it.
By Ngarangi

Purple is like the juiciest plum that grows in a tree and keeps growing.
By Cameron

Purple is like a sour grape that is sweet to eat.
By Ava

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