Last week we did all of our work around a space theme - it was a busy week with production preparation and other stuff, but here are a few of our stories (cut and pasted straight from our typing - if you are having trouble reading it just sound out the letters and hopefully you'll be able to decipher it!)
Once a pona time there was a alein hre name was shine because she was shine. One day a astsrnot came to dstroye there homes. Lucky it was a drem, well she fote it was a grem but it wasint! wen she wock up there was screming and she looked out the wedow and sor pepl raning like mad so shine did to. some went in there flyingsorses. shine got out her gan and shotid the astrnot and thea all livd happy evre rftr.
Jack the astnotnt went in his space ship Jack went to mars
he went to see his aleein frines then he played with them then Jack the astnotnt
head to eath.
onec uopn a time there aleein its name is funny she looked like a dog. she has one eye the eye was magic it kiled lots of boys and her home was a hole and lived happily ever after
One day tyler went to a little ilind it was verey little.Do you know why
tyler went to the little ilind because he hasint sin this ilind befor.
So tyler mayd the sbas sip go little and tyler landid on erfe
so tyler went out of the sbas sip and on erfe jus’t then tyler
sore a grop of little aleyins apid (appeared) out of nowire tyler didin’t no
wot to dow but then tyler had a idire so tyler got up and
and cild (killed) the aleyins in one ginomis kick and one hit.
and they were all didde (dead) so tyler went home and
got his stuf and went back to little planit and
mivd in and had lots of room to put his stuf
then he made tee and livd happy ever aftre.
Awesome Narratives Room 4!! Keep up the fantastic work! From Room 2 :)
ReplyDeleteWOW! Great work Room 4. We are writing narratives as well and we think your writing is FANTASTIC!
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nice work. however I've been hearing a lot of DYING stuff though...
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